a short one
well this is a very short fiction of mine.glad to say it was my very first one.some of y'all have seen tiff's blog how does a fiction looked like ryte??but mines will be quite diff cuz it was actually based on my school english essay hw 4 tyhe hols.so hope u enjoy.but b4 i proceed,there will be spelling error,er..some korean words in it and more things tht u might don undersatand.time is short 4 me now,so maybe i;ll do half of it first but hope u'll enjoy.=)
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i knocked on the door after ten years to fulfill my promise to meet up with her after the sudden break up tht we've been thrugh.i knocked and knocked but there's no answer,i wondered whether tht she have moved out or shift 2 somewhere else.i hope she did not cuz i've been missing her 4 years and i've been lomging 2 see her almost 4 a decade.then,the door shut opened.there stood a lady in between the age of 20 to 30 yers old.she was the same as 10 years ago and i couldnt take my eyes off her.
"hello there,can i help u,ajusshi(mr)?may i know who are u looking for?"she asked
but i didnt responded.i was too caught up with her look tht i hadnt see 4 like a century 4 me.then,she woke me up from my fantasy by calling me.
"excuse me,ajusshi.are u alright??"she asked again.i was surprised tht she couldnt recognise me.ten years back,jaelynn and i was a lovely couple till 1 day we have to braeak up bcuz my parents insisted me 2 further my studies in korea.in ten years time.i finally finished my studies but fortyunately i've joined a boy-band group named TVXQ.TVXQ now is one of the most well-known boy band in South East Asia.now tht i've got 2 see her again,ntg can be pulled out frm my mouth.
"i'm sorrry,ajusshi.but can i know who are u looking 4?"she asked me.
"u looked familiar to me"she claimed.
"oh,really?"i said.i was happy she said i looked familiar and hope tht she could recognise her as her lover.but smtg tells me she dont recognise me the way i wanted her to.
"aren't u Xiah Junsu frm TVXQ?"she proclimed.
once i heard tht sentencemy head looked down.she jz know me as the Prince of TVXQ but not her lover.i was indeed disappointed tht she didnt recognise me at all.
"yes i am.dont u recognise me,jaelynn?i'm Kim."i answered.
she looked with at me shockly as her eyes widened up.maybe it wasnt her fault tht she couldnt recognised me cuz i've changed my look,my name even my personality(hehe..hos dolphin lugh of course was one of his cutest personality.eiu khiang khiang)when i was in Koreabut i know deep down in my heart,my love towards her never changed jz like tht a deceade ago.
she welcomed me in when i admited tht i am one of the twins of TVXQ.she's afraid there willl be paparatzzi will stalk me or smtg,i went into her house.ntg changed.the couch weas still the old black cushion one and the side wall is stilll in green colour(my room condition) but slightly faded because it was a very long time since it was last painted.
suddenly i heard a scream.
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!mummy,mummy.max bully me."a lil gurl voice could be heard frm upstairs.
i wondered who was the lil, girl screaming and who was the mum she referring it too.then.two little kids,a girl and a boy ran down frm upstairs and hugged my lover who was jz sitting in front of me.
"mummy,he bullied me." the girl pouted.
"no.she started first."the boy defend himself.
"but he hit me.."the girl complained again.
"its because u started it first."the small boy claimed.
the two kids continue argue like there was no ending.but then i realised,if those two kids called jaelynn their mum,does tht mean she is.........................
i couldnt belive my eyes .i still rmb the promise we made at the airport.the promise we made and we came into a hug.my heart was crushed into million pieces.i just cant belive tht tht she broke her promise,fall 4 another man and get married. and now she even have two kids.
i looked up at her.she seeems to know wht i was thinking.but still,she remained silent and calm her 2 kids down.she walked back towards the kitchen 2 and prepare me a cup of tea.
i looked around the house bringing back old memories of me and her in this house.but still i thought deeply,why did she break the promise?why,why?why?was it my fault??
ok.i'm running out of time.will continue the story 2mrw.so far,enjoyed??i hope i am a good author.hehe.erm,so gtg.annyeong!!!
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i knocked on the door after ten years to fulfill my promise to meet up with her after the sudden break up tht we've been thrugh.i knocked and knocked but there's no answer,i wondered whether tht she have moved out or shift 2 somewhere else.i hope she did not cuz i've been missing her 4 years and i've been lomging 2 see her almost 4 a decade.then,the door shut opened.there stood a lady in between the age of 20 to 30 yers old.she was the same as 10 years ago and i couldnt take my eyes off her.
"hello there,can i help u,ajusshi(mr)?may i know who are u looking for?"she asked
but i didnt responded.i was too caught up with her look tht i hadnt see 4 like a century 4 me.then,she woke me up from my fantasy by calling me.
"excuse me,ajusshi.are u alright??"she asked again.i was surprised tht she couldnt recognise me.ten years back,jaelynn and i was a lovely couple till 1 day we have to braeak up bcuz my parents insisted me 2 further my studies in korea.in ten years time.i finally finished my studies but fortyunately i've joined a boy-band group named TVXQ.TVXQ now is one of the most well-known boy band in South East Asia.now tht i've got 2 see her again,ntg can be pulled out frm my mouth.
"i'm sorrry,ajusshi.but can i know who are u looking 4?"she asked me.
"u looked familiar to me"she claimed.
"oh,really?"i said.i was happy she said i looked familiar and hope tht she could recognise her as her lover.but smtg tells me she dont recognise me the way i wanted her to.
"aren't u Xiah Junsu frm TVXQ?"she proclimed.
once i heard tht sentencemy head looked down.she jz know me as the Prince of TVXQ but not her lover.i was indeed disappointed tht she didnt recognise me at all.
"yes i am.dont u recognise me,jaelynn?i'm Kim."i answered.
she looked with at me shockly as her eyes widened up.maybe it wasnt her fault tht she couldnt recognised me cuz i've changed my look,my name even my personality(hehe..hos dolphin lugh of course was one of his cutest personality.eiu khiang khiang)when i was in Koreabut i know deep down in my heart,my love towards her never changed jz like tht a deceade ago.
she welcomed me in when i admited tht i am one of the twins of TVXQ.she's afraid there willl be paparatzzi will stalk me or smtg,i went into her house.ntg changed.the couch weas still the old black cushion one and the side wall is stilll in green colour(my room condition) but slightly faded because it was a very long time since it was last painted.
suddenly i heard a scream.
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!mummy,mummy.max bully me."a lil gurl voice could be heard frm upstairs.
i wondered who was the lil, girl screaming and who was the mum she referring it too.then.two little kids,a girl and a boy ran down frm upstairs and hugged my lover who was jz sitting in front of me.
"mummy,he bullied me." the girl pouted.
"no.she started first."the boy defend himself.
"but he hit me.."the girl complained again.
"its because u started it first."the small boy claimed.
the two kids continue argue like there was no ending.but then i realised,if those two kids called jaelynn their mum,does tht mean she is.........................
i couldnt belive my eyes .i still rmb the promise we made at the airport.the promise we made and we came into a hug.my heart was crushed into million pieces.i just cant belive tht tht she broke her promise,fall 4 another man and get married. and now she even have two kids.
i looked up at her.she seeems to know wht i was thinking.but still,she remained silent and calm her 2 kids down.she walked back towards the kitchen 2 and prepare me a cup of tea.
i looked around the house bringing back old memories of me and her in this house.but still i thought deeply,why did she break the promise?why,why?why?was it my fault??
ok.i'm running out of time.will continue the story 2mrw.so far,enjoyed??i hope i am a good author.hehe.erm,so gtg.annyeong!!!
Labels: fan fiction, friendship, fun, haha, junsu, loud spoken secret, love, love spoken secret, me and my story, spoken out secret, tvxq, unspoken secret
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